What We Can Be, If You Let Us

[romennim]

Title: What We Can Be, If You Let Us
Author: Romennim
Betas: slightly_o and 1lostone
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Star Trek TOS
Pairing: Kirk/Spock/McCoy
Warnings: none
Summary: near the end of the five-year mission, an unexpected request of transfer forces Kirk and Spock to confront the doctor about their relationship and their future together.

Comments

[rusting-roses.livejournal.com]

Wow! I loved it! The characterizations were absolutely excellent. I like also that you have it in italian, as I've been learning the language for the last two years, and your translations are great motivation to practice! ;) Please keep up with the writing!!

[romennim.livejournal.com]

Thank you!! I was a bit worried about the characterizations, since it was my first fic ever, so I'm happy it was good.
I'll write more and I'll be sure to post everything in Italian, too :)

[1lostone.livejournal.com]

congratulations, BB! It's awesome! :D

[romennim.livejournal.com]

Thank you!! But if it's awesome and it's posted, it's also thanks to you: the comment you wrote me after having beated the story gave me the courage to do it.
So, thank you again :)

[1lostone.livejournal.com]

AWWWWW.. Well for that, I leave you with some Iconic tush wiggling.



:D

[romennim.livejournal.com]

How can I ever repay that? :)

[shan-n.livejournal.com]

AHAHAHA YES! Shake that thang!

[vicarious-renji.livejournal.com]

I was seriously considering making an icon just like yours XD

[1lostone.livejournal.com]

:D I love my icon. I find myself wanting to post randomly then lick my screen.

[une-funambule.livejournal.com]

This was wonderful! Well-written OT3 is a marvel. An in-depth look into a real and complicated relationship, and I love the way you've really made it a chapter from a story - a lifelong story. Would love to read more from you - perhaps, the way their first discussion about 'our relationship' went? Thank you again!

[romennim.livejournal.com]

:) it's an idea.. I will think about it, but I'm not sure I'll do it, 'cause the idea for this one-shot was just for this.. I have a few ideas for a story about their relationship, I'm trying to write down a plot right now, but I'm a bit busy with university and other stuff.
However I can assure you I'll write more about them: I'm totally obsessed about their relationship and the interaction among them.
If you want to follow what I write you can add me as friend :)
And thanks for your comment!

[une-funambule.livejournal.com]

Ah, well, to get a long story with a plot would be twice as awesome! I'll be waiting more patiently, knowing what's to come. And I know it's hard to strike a right balance between your studies and fandom, hope you'll make it work :)
Hmm, I'm not exactly of a socializing type, but the idea has its merits :D

[romennim.livejournal.com]

:) I thought about your suggestion of writing a story about their first discussion and I have some ideas. this weekend maybe I'll write something. as for the longer story with a plot, it will take a while also for another reason: I want to see first the original series, to make sure to make their characterizations right. I want also to write a story about them in the reboot universe, so maybe you'll read it as first... and sooner :)
I hope this doesn't disappoint, but I don't want to begin posting a story without being sure about where I'm going with it.. I hate unfinished or abandoned stories or long waits between updates and I don't want to treat persons who take time to read and comment my stuff like that.

[romennim.livejournal.com]

I surely will! Maybe something this weekend :)
thanks for the comment

[badgerpride89.livejournal.com]

Can I hug you? Because I seriously love this story. You have Spock's POV down flat and the whole situation is just lovely (well, the writing, not the fact the guys were hurting so badly but you made it all better so yay!) I can't wait to read more from you so keep up the good work!

[romennim.livejournal.com]

thank you! I'm very glad you liked it.
I'm already writing something that, hopefully, will be finished soon :)

[dizilla.livejournal.com]

This was lovely! I thought it was interesting to have it from Spock's perspective with his analysis of what was going on and him trying to figure it all out. Also loved poor Bones and his feelings of not being enough. Nicely done. ^_^

[romennim.livejournal.com]

I don't know why but it was natural for me to write the whole scene from Spock's point of view..
thank you for your comment!

[yesterday-girl.livejournal.com]

Wow!

Just brilliant. Thank for writing such a wonderful fic with these 3. I lvoe this exploration of the 3 of them in a relationship. The insecurities and concerns all 3 have are so well portrayed. I love your characterisation. Spot on.

There are not enough Kirk/Spocl/Bones fics out there!

I look forward to reading more from you again soon.

*goes to reread a second time*

[romennim.livejournal.com]

thank you for such a positive comment!
I agree with you.. there are not enough fics about them.. and about exploring their relationship! I think that it's one of the main reasons I got inspiration to write something of my own :)
if you're interested I wrote other two things about them, a one-shot and the prologue of the story I'm currently writing; you can read it in my lj.
I'd be happy to hear your opinion about them too :)

thank you again for your comment

[mashnut.livejournal.com]

I love your writing! Really well done. Such a complex relationship too. :)
Found it posted on trekslash.
Thanks for posting these!
mashnut

[romennim.livejournal.com]

oh thank you! :) if you're interested, I wrote more about them and I'd be glad to hear your opinion :)

[1bill-sookie.livejournal.com]

Amazing. I loved the depth of hurt, careing, and love in this. You can really see how much they care about each other and are afraid of facing the depth of that love and all it entiles. Not many people can keep Spock and the other people in charcter or make his/their emontions belivable when they're writing a threesome that dosn't involve sex, but you nailed it. Keep it up :)

[romennim.livejournal.com]

thank you! I'm glad you thought everyone was in character :) it's a very huge compliment :)

Comment left by emerald in the KSarchive, 05/12/2010 4:10 AM

[romennim.livejournal.com]

I really love how you wrote Spock's POV with this. You wrote the characters very well. Is this part of another story? I'd love to see a sequel to this one.