The Cup Of Coffee

[romennim]

Title: The Cup Of Coffee
Author: Romennim
Beta: writer_klmeri
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Star Trek TOS
Pairing: Kirk/Spock/McCoy
Warnings: none
Summary: sometimes we just have to understand that we're not what the person we love needs.

Comments

[writer-klmeri.livejournal.com]

:) Need I say anything? Wonderful job! An innovative glimpse at our trio from another's eyes... I really really love this piece!

[romennim.livejournal.com]

thank you, dear :) I'm very happy you liked it :)
and it was interesting describing them and their relationship from another person's point of view. I think I'll do it again

[lilbatfacedgirl.livejournal.com]

Okay, forgot K/S/M and all their potential combinations. I think you and klmeri might be my new favorite pairing!!

[romennim.livejournal.com]

*blushes* your comment delighted both klmeri and me, so thank you, really :)... and it still makes me smile like an idiot, even if I read it a lot of times by now :)

[1bill-sookie.livejournal.com]

Great outsider persepctive. I like that you didn't make her an idoit. I was surprised it was Rand, for the first paragraph or so I thought it was McCoy. I loved the scene she walked in on. For some reason the times when they just hold each other always make me mealt. I think it's because how well you get across how deep their love, caring, and devotion runs in a completly none sexual way. It's like I said before, not many people can do that with traids, but those that can have great talnet. They make the relanship belivable, which is what you do. Read more soon.

[romennim.livejournal.com]

thank you! I admit I have a soft spot for this type of moments, when they show tenderness to each other :) I like them so much that I've begun to write another one!!
and please know that you saying that I make them and their relationship believable helps me - and my writing - a lot :)

[vala3.livejournal.com]

Very nice POV for Janice. In TOS she was left with very little to do except for being Kirk's yoeman and eye candy. (The hairdo was ridiculous!). This shows her in a much better way.

[romennim.livejournal.com]

I admit I picked her by chance.. I wanted an outsider p.o.v., a p.o.v. of a woman that loved Kirk, and I liked the idea of a woman that could know the three a bit more than the average crew member or occasional character of one of the episodes. she came to my mind, and when I began to write the piece she felt right, so I went on. :) I'm glad about how it turned out, and glad that it is nice for the readers too :)
thank you for your comment :)

[purple-spock.livejournal.com]

I love the outsider perspective on all of this - that she can see their relationship from a completely different context. Really great job. : D

[romennim.livejournal.com]

thank you! I like to write in outsider pov, Janice especially :)