Telling Moments

[romennim]

Title: Telling Moments
Author: Romennim
Beta: writer_klmeri
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Star Trek TOS
Pairing: Kirk/Spock/McCoy
Warnings: none
Summary: How much of what you think you know is a result of what you see? And how much of that is a result of your imagination, instead?

Comments

[1bill-sookie.livejournal.com]

Great, as ever. I loved those little singles we're shown, and "simple, natural possibility" was a simple yet touching and brillent way to end this.

[romennim.livejournal.com]

thank you!

[cyanne]

Aww, this is really lovely. It's always neat to see an outsider's pov.

[romennim.livejournal.com]

thank you very much! I admit I like outsiders' pov very much

[writer-klmeri.livejournal.com]

I doubt I need to say anything... except GOOD JOB! ;)

[romennim.livejournal.com]

:) :) thank you

[vail-kagami.livejournal.com]

Aw, I like this! Love fics about them from an outsider pov, and Janice was a neat choice!

[romennim.livejournal.com]

ah, I like this type of fics too!! :)

thank you for your comment

[kendermouse.livejournal.com]

very nice. The small, simple things - a touch, a tone, proximity... all the little things that add up to so much.

Love the outside POV - and loved that it was Rand. The slow realization as she tries to put the pieces together and isn't sure WHAT it equals... until she sees them ALL together. (and the voices of the three are SO spot on!)

Very well done piece.

pax,
the kendermouse

[romennim.livejournal.com]

thank you!

if you liked the outside pov, and Janice, I have written another piece from her pov.. the building of the story is slightly different, but maybe you'll like it anyway. you can find it here (http://romennim.livejournal.com/10343.html)

[purple-spock.livejournal.com]

You're just full of great pieces. : ) I love Jim in this one, the ease with which he handles the situation. great job. : D

[romennim.livejournal.com]

thank you! you make me blush :)