This Love

[romennim]

Title: This Love
Author: Romennim
Beta: inspired_being
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Merlin
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin pre-slash
Warnings: none
Summary: "Sometimes you think this love will kill you. "

Comments

[beizanten.livejournal.com]

So beautiful. It's so arthur not to realize merlin feeling

[romennim.livejournal.com]

yes, that's true.. :)
thank you for your comment!

[kajmere.livejournal.com]

awww i love this ♥

[romennim.livejournal.com]

:) thank you!
and I love your icon :)

[archaeologist-d.livejournal.com]

Oh, poor Merlin. No wonder he's hitting his head. I really liked the last line!

[romennim.livejournal.com]

:) thank you!!

[lawgoddess.livejournal.com]

This was lovely, although pensive. I'd like to think it's not totally unrequited, but I'm sure to Merlin it looks that way.

I enjoyed this a lot.

[romennim.livejournal.com]

I don't think it's unrequited too, but I liked the idea of writing a piece where Merlin doesn't know yet that Arthur loves him back.

thank you for your comment! :)

[cutiewitchgirl.livejournal.com]

awww so sad, but such a great fic

[romennim.livejournal.com]

oh, thank you very much! :)

[inspired-being.livejournal.com]

I loved your ideas and the deep emotional feelins Merlin has for Arthur. I think my favourite part was Merlin hitting his head and Arthur asking what he was doing. That's so typically them and it makes this fic so much more real.

remind me to fix a couple of things

[romennim.livejournal.com]

thank you.. :) I like that part too

[timetraveller90.livejournal.com]

Wow this was beautiful and heartbreaking

[romennim.livejournal.com]

thank you!!

[rain-polish.livejournal.com]

That is truly beautiful. You express the feelings of being in love so eloquently, you can really feel it. Very in-character with Merlin hitting his head on the wall and Arthur asking what he's doing. The last line really got me... Dear Merlin. <3

[romennim.livejournal.com]

thank you, really. it's always good to hear that your piece made other people feel :) I think there's no higher praise for a writer